Feedback - Week #3 (Iterations)

 

FEEDBACK WEEK #3





I got feedback from two more people, primarily regarding the two vehicle iterations I made, as well as the character iteration I made (the top image).

Mark: I think the four-legged design looks very powerful but maybe it doesn't look agile enough. Maybe play with the proportions so it looks like it can move faster. The one in the middle looks very nimble which is good. Character design looks cool but maybe make it more extreme.

Paik: I like that you have tried different colour options. Biege tone is nice. But if the goal is alien, maybe purple is more suitable. You may need to balance aesthetic vs the brief/goal you need to meet.

Addressing Feedback:

I think based on this I'll consider more how the vehicle can look simultaneously powerful and agile (not sacrificing an impression of mobility, as it is a race after all), and also think more about appropriate colour choices.





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